This one feels rough. Like I feel like the author has talent, significant talent even,but this is the first time in a while that I’ve ranted about a book while trying to get the review together. And a lot of that is down to my somehow entirely missing that it’s a re-imagining and a romance that I just couldn’t get into for various reasons. That all said, this one is thanks to netGalley, here’s Mary Baader Kaley’s Burrowed. Enjoy!
Generations past a genetic plague swept through humanity, killing many and leaving those who remained split between strong, healthy Omniterraneans and sickly Subterraneans who must dwell in underground tunnels for the sake of their health. In this split world brilliant but sickly Zuzan Cayan’s short life expectancy leaves her with no chance at her dream job, raising the next generation of Subter children. Despite this, she is pushed to join one of the preeminent research Burrows to study the genetic codes of Omnits and Subters. To find a way to bring the shattered remains of humanity back together. At least, that was supposed to be her job until a plague sweeps through the Omnits, threatening humanity as a whole if Zuzan cannot find a cure.
Reviewing Mary Baader Kaley’s Burrowed almost feels unfair. I somehow completely missed that it was a Jane Eyre reimagining and have to admit that I probably would not have picked it up had I noticed. Not that I have anything against Jane Eyre, I simply have not read it and find that other genre retellings tend to feel a bit off, like the author had something interesting they wanted to do but felt constrained by the source material. There is also that going from recombining two vastly different offshoots of the same species to curing a plague that only affects one offshoot is a lot to cover in one book. But I was curious and the idea of a sci-fi post-apocalyptic medical drama has serious promise.
This one moves slowly. There is extended time given to our protagonist’s childhood from leaving her inexplicably terrible nurse maid to her arrival at Cayan Burrow, home to what are apparently simultaneously the sickest Subter children as well as the brightest and most promising, to the days just before her graduation to adulthood. A lot of it feels unnecessary, but it is also some of the more enjoyable writing in the book. Past it we get the introductions of Zuzan’s soon to be boss slash love interest and the almost comically awful antagonist with the promised plot following shortly after, somewhere around the halfway mark of the book.
The romance eats way more page space than it feels like it deserves. Maven Ringol is Zuzan’s boss and is quite happy to pull the boss card on her to make her do things his way, usually her actual job. Seems to be deeply attracted to her and absolutely repelled by her by turns because she refuses to just do her job without all the information needed and without questioning him. And just generally seems to bounce between being a decent guy and a complete jerk. Zuzan also cannot seem to decide if she hates him with every fiber of her being or desperately wants him to love her. None of it works for me as a reader which, unfortunately, means that a lot of the second half of the book feels like a drag. Especially when a lot of the science feels like it was skimmed over in favor of rushing to Zuzan butting into someone else’s project and showing that she is so much better than everyone else at functionally everything.
Like, Zuzan is the rare character that I have little issue with calling too perfect. She has perfect memory, not eddic memory, specifically perfect memory as though she has the actual information right in front of her. She is not allowed to be wrong in significant ways or allowed to fail beyond what it takes to rachet up the drama of a single scene. She is not even allowed to stay ugly by Subter standards and keep her protective goggles that allow her to see. And I hate that so much. Like, the goggles are introduced as something she desperately needs in order to see and interact with the world around her. She has to take tests on paper because the projector tablets everyone else uses do not work with her goggles. This is a big deal and a major part of how Zuzan is more fragile than other Subters. But then she gets to Ringol’s Burrow and they just get replaced no problem.
Cayan Burrow with its highly respected, often imitated medera just did not have the funding to get her anything other than the goggles. It just feels like a weird conflux of Kaley needing Zuzan to be pretty for the romance to happen and the world building not quite being complete. Here is an item that can so totally change Zuzan’s life and, given the existence of the replacement contact lenses, presumably the lives of many other Subters. So, even if not the super expensive version given to Zuzan, why is there not something similar that would be better than her goggles? The Subters have short life spans and need as many people as possible doing as much as they can for society as a whole and this would improve both people’s lives and their chances of helping Subter society. It is kind of similar to my wondering why, despite relying heavily on them for building and maintaining the caves, the Subters and Omnits do not seem to communicate at all. Talking to them could have solved half of the plot to Burrowed or at least given it a bit more depth than just telling the reader that Omnits are dumb and aggressive.
The whole book is kind of a mess like that. Clearly Kaley is a pretty decent writer, but I want to see what she does when not constrained by trying to adapt someone else’s work. I want to see what happens when she digs into her world building a little more and pokes at the mechanics of her world to see what works and why. So, while Burrowed was really not my cup of tea and gets a two out of five from me, I really do want to pick up something she writes again, maybe two or three books from now.